kemaren aku nulis blog yang pake inggris katanya tmenku ancur abiss’..huehehe…
karenanya aku minta dia sekalian koreksi mana yang benar’
ini dia koreksi dari blog saya sebelumnya
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Honey, I shrunk to kid >harusnya> I have shrunk (ternyata shrunk itu verb 3)
Well, this oddity happens if I go home. Since I have been in bandung I very rarely go home, only during long holiday and semester vacation.
If I am home, something strange happens to my body. The clothes that I left at home have become too big to fit my body. It’s strange, I remember those clothes (shirt or trouser) fit me when time I left them at home. However, after [A1] less or more about one week, those clothes became smaller and smaller to my body. This phenomenon[A2] does not only happen once, but everytime I go home.at first, I thought It was only my imagination , but later, after I have rethought this phenomenon can be true…(hiiii …is frightening khan???)
Has my body shrunk In my out-of-town life??
Or, maybe my clothes at home grew bigger when i left them??
well, nobody knows
[A1]“but” can’t be used as the first word ina sentence..
[A2]Phenomena is the plural form of phenomenon. Since there is only one phenomenon, we use THIS phenomenon. If you are going to use “phenomena” you must use THESE.
btw , buat eva thanks bgt buat ralatnya…(janji deh akan belajar lagi bhs inggris nya)hehe…(daripada ntar malu)hahaha….
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